Is everyone enjoying the story? Because if you aren't I can just stop and delete this. 

But if you do or don't like this book please comment on what you think. 

I am having very low selfesteam about this book, the chapters, the characters, and even the whole setting place time and a lot more. 

Please don't be afraid to say negative things I will take it, but please be honest and comment in whether or not I should continue.