Problems
AN. Ok guys imma make up for not posting in FOREVER... I'm sorry I'm gonna continue this book but I don't believe I will with others I've just lost a lot of inspiration, I've seen a lot of support for this book and I think you all want more of it, if so I'll most definitely continue this book with longer chapters and a interesting twist, hope you like.
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I was walking to y/n house with her in my arms we've been together for 2 months 3 weeks and a day, Ive met her mom many times, but they always make me leave when her dad is on his way home. When I was carrying her she fell asleep and she looked so peaceful hair covering the leafy side of her face head leaned back and eyes closed peacefully. But I saw a mark on her collarbone that looked like a bruise, "y/n" "y/n" I stared to shake her lightly. She slowly woke up "what baby" "who did this I'm hoping it's not a bruise or a hickey" "I-i, I don't know" "tell me i won't leave no matter what I swear"
"My.... dad....."
"WHAT" I screamed outraged, I walked to her house and the whole way she was telling me no. But I didn't listen
"Baby no he will hurt you, he's not right in the head" she begged as he just kept going to her house.
"Stay out here" I said as I walked up to the door.
//third person\\
As hunter walked up to the house he knocked on the door roughly, "OPEN THE GOD DAM* DOOR" after 2 minuets he kicked it once, than twice, than three times and it opened, y/n mom was unconscious on the couch and her dad was over top her undoing his pants, he quickly stopped when he saw hunter and went to grab the hammer he hit her mother with when hunter tackled the man, and swings at him as hard as he can getting a satisfying crunch from the mans nose, than he hit him harder and harder until you see the man go limp
// y/n POV \\
Hunter was beating my father as much as I hate him I can't let hunter kill him, I mean he's my dad, but hunter would go to jail, so I ran over to him and tried to pull him off and hunter suddenly pulled my dad into a choke hold and was going to kill him, I can't let him go to jail I thought, I started to cry. "IM SORRY" I screamed as I picked up the hammer and hit him.
446 words I'm gonna do 600-1000 next time
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