"How dare you even think of such! My queen will not go through such!" He roared in anger as the men stepped back. "You know not of the circumstances that led her to were she is! If anyone of you utters any more nonsense there will be blood spilled," he said standing tall as he looked down upon them as some stepped back further upon hearing his words....

That's all

Also would like to know if everyone is enjoying it so far,

Is it cliche or just right?????