Okay, I don't know if I should be disappointed or amused. We have another tie.
October: 10 (-2)
Adrian: 9.5 (-.5)
Keegan: (-.5)

Adrian and Keegan have very balanced entries and they were similar in style, organization, character response, and development. Because of this I couldn't decide how to differentiate your scores and it came down to the peer voting. Only, that upheld the tie.
A few things I would like to say before I announce how this tie will be broken:
- you both definitely stepped it up this challenge. Keegan, you came back from a low score last time, and Adrian you have remained relatively high this entire competition.
- however, I know you both have it in you to do better. I feel that you might be playing it safe a little which is dangerous because it leads to situations like this. It's time to bring the big guns!
- while shorter entries can be good and writer's block is a pain, try to make yours longer. It provides more room for  emotion and story telling.
- I want more from you. I want it all. You've gotten better and improved like crazy! I can see it so much compared to your first entries! I'm proud of that! But I feel like you're holding back Adrian and Keegan from me. I need more from them.

Tie Breaker:
To break this tie, I want you both to submit to me in a private message exactly why you should stay in. Convince me that you will make the finale one hell of an ending competing against October! You can do it! I believe in you!