I fixed it! It's still not that great, but it's WAY better than it was, if'n I do say so myself. :P Enjoy! (and comment and vote, you crazies!) 

As the rain comes falling down,

My fears are washed away.

And it pushes up my roots,

And makes me long for day.

When the bluebird sings its song,

And when the robin plays.

You’ll find me,

Happy in my resting place.

And as my buds do close for night,

I’ll remember when the rain came here,

And washed away my pain,

And washed away my fear.

I care not,

So let it rain, and let it pour,

For I know that when it stops,

The sun will shine once more.

I’m more than just a pretty face,

I’m a rose that loves the sunshine,

So let the rain come down,

I will be just fine.

And when it finally goes away,

The sun will shine again,

And out will come a rainbow,

To brighten my dark glen.

For I’m a teardrop in the ocean,

A shadow in the night.

I’m a whisper in the rain,

And yes, I'll be alright.

I may be forgotten,

Yet forever I'll be near.

For always when the sun shines down,

My memories will live here.