Hey guys I have been fair through out judging and judged the book without any bias..

BOOK NAME - Yaariyan ever after

WRITER - @lovingkuri

REVIEWED BY - @2000kavi

CATEGORY - Fanfiction

WAS THE PLOT ENGAGING ENOUGH?

Yeah it seemed interesting to me I loved the plot of your story..

WOULD I LIKE TO READ THE REST OF THE BOOK AFTER READING THREE CHAPTER??

Yeah ur story is a kind of addiction.. I felt to read more and more chapters..

DO THE WRITER NEED TO DO SOME CHANGES IN THE BOOK ??...

It's just my suggestion if u can add dialogue in English along with Hindi as some readers may be don't know Hindi and work out on some spelling ..it would be more better but it's just my suggestion..

WHAT ABOUT THE CHARACTERS OF THE STORY ??.. DO YOU FIND THEM INTERESTING ENOUGH??

Yeah the way u have described the character it is easy to link them with the story as I haven't watched the show , the description of characters helped me a lot through out..

TITLE AND COVER

The title to ur story is perfect but u can change cover of ur story if u want , it was just my suggestion as it will make ur story look more attractive..

I would rate ur story 4.8 on 5 ..

1 point for interesting plot..
1point for fantastic resume..
1point for character description perfectly..
.9 for writing style ( it can be better if u add dialogue in English)
.9 for title and cover ( a better cover can help u out)

Thank you so much...