Hey guys I have been fair through out judging and judged the book without any bias..

BOOK NAME- Jack X Elsa

WRITER- prayerwarrior247

Reviewed by - 2000kavi

Category- Fanfiction

WAS THE PLOT ENAGING ENOUGH?

Yeah the plot was awesome... I liked it and it's quite engaging enough...

WOULD I LIKE TO READ THE REST OF THE BOOK AFTER READING THREE CHAPTER??

Of course the thrill and suspense of the story keeps the reader engaged and that's a quiet positive thing for the story..

DO THE WRITER NEED TO DO SOME CHANGES IN THE BOOK ??...

Your Grammar is superb and writing style is also good but it's my just suggestion if u would add description as emotions or about characters it would be great... Just my suggestion.. Whole opinion is urs..

WHAT ABOUT THE CHARACTERS OF THE STORY ??.. DO YOU FIND THEM INTERESTING ENOUGH??

Yeah I liked them but it would be better if u had given description about the character of the story (just suggestion)

TITLE AND COVER

The cover and title both are quiet attractive infact cover was awesome..

I will rate your story 4.6 on 5

1 point for plot
1point for interesting resume
.8 for writing style ( it lacks descriptions sometimes)
.8 for characters ( character description was missing)
1for title and cover

Thank you so much..