the second chapter hope you enjoy!

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narrator: lets continue (flash BACK! now)

"Hey, you wanna come for my SWEET SIXTEEN party?!" Sierra said in excitement 

"Yeah why not," I said

narrator: as I said mistake number one...

Me: why?

Narrator: you will SEE how many times?

Me: I thought it was a flash back so ... we had to stick with the script

Narrator: Forget It!

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"when is it" i asked thinking about what i was going to wear.

"NOW!" she said,"I know my birthday is tomorrow and it is out of nowhere but I wanted you to have a surprise!"

"What?"

"Let's GO!"

When I got out of the car in front of her house I could hear the Music piercing my ears. it was a Hard Metal kind of music which didn't suit me.

We opened the front of the door, as I heard Sierra saying, "I'm so Sorry" as she moved across the people who were dancing. Balloons were put up everywhere there were 30 people in the back garden by the pool and in the pool while there were about another 20 in the house and in the front yard too.Thrown cups were everywhere, strange liquids had leaked was all over the floor, I couldn't and wouldn't any see more.I had to escape my head was pounding. random people put their wet, sticky arm around me .i could smell a stench of a pungent whiskey surrounding the house it wouldn't and couldn't stop.30 minutes in, as I suddenly heard a siren ringing it was coming towards us. people panicked and panicked. I panicked, I needed something to drink I couldn't see and grabbed the nearest thing near me I gulped it down and within a few seconds, I WAS OUT.