🔪》Title, Cover, & Blurb

The title fits the story and it's capitalized correctly. The cover is alright, but it doesn't really draw readers in. Maybe try making the green darker and the yellow color more gold. The blurb introduces the story very well!

🔪》Plot

The plots of each short story are clear and easy to understand. The stories draw the readers in and make them want to find out what happens. The expositions for each story introduce the world and characters very well. You give good background information about the world in the story and it's easy for the readers to understand the setting. The main conflict in the stories is engaging and keeps the readers hooked. The stories progressed at a nice pace as well.

🔪》Characters

All the characters are introduced and described very well. The descriptions were very well done! It was easy to picture what the creatures looked like even though I wasn't familiar with them beforehand. The characters personalities are also shown well throughout the chapters.

🔪》Grammar/Spelling

There were a few spelling errors throughout the chapters and some spots where it seemed a word was missing from the sentence.

🔪》Writing Style

The writing style was consistent throughout the chapters and it was excellent! The writing style definitely reminds me of a nature documentary. The writing style fits the story very well and helps immerse the readers in the story. As mentioned, you do an excellent job describing the appearance of the creatures and the world. You also work the descriptions and information into the story well. The chapters are long, however, it works with how the book is set up since each chapter contains a short story. The action and events in the story are described very well. It was very easy to get caught up in the story and want to keep reading.

🔪》Enjoyment

Honestly, this story really isn't my cup of tea and I've never enjoyed nature documentaries. The story was an enjoyable read though and I did find myself getting wrapped up in the stories! "The Tree Dwellers" was my favorite chapter!

🔪》Overall

Overall, the book was very well done! The stories were interesting and action-packed. The stories hooked the readers and made them want to keep reading to see what happens to the characters. The descriptions and information were worked into the story seamlessly. It was easy for the readers to understand the world and characters even if they aren't familiar with the time periods. It's clear you put a lot of research and thought into these stories! Good luck with your book!