So... this is kind of unusual but I tried to write a song of my own, of course, since I'm an amateur at it I can't even figure out a beat for it but the lyrics are pretty much done, this was all made on impulse honestly but I could use some criticism! Please...? Thanks!

Foolish friendship (W.I.P)
To think that once we used to laugh
We used to reminisce on stuff of the past
The three musketeers had nothing on us
So why'd it turn into ashes and dust

Oh how I loved to be together
I thought it'd last forever
Never could've guessed
That in the home we built I was just a guest

Here I was thinking of sunshine and rainbows
Forgetting all about the shadows
Lurking
And waiting
For the time I'd slip up
Luckily for them it didn't take me long at all

All this experience was a foolish friendship
Led by a foolish child who didn't know better
Asking if they were the answer
To all of those prayers

You taught me love, you taught me pain
It seems like all you truly did was mess with my brain
I see your faces over and over again
Is this some kind of cruel game?

What else do you want from me?
Haven't I given you everything?
After all that we've been through
You're still the cause of my suffering

Oh how I loved to be together
I thought it'd last forever
Never could've guessed
That in the home we built I was just a guest

You taught me love, you taught me pain
It seems like all you truly did was mess with my brain
I see your faces over and over again
Is this some kind of cruel game?

But oh, like the Phoenix I shall rise
From those ashes you made of my heart
And I know, oh I know,
I won't need you any longer
'Cause all you were

Was a foolish friendship