↻ AUTHOR ࿐྄ྀ Caranyx
↻ REVIEWER ࿐྄ྀ -jennieverse-

First Light :: 12/20

» Title :: 4/5

The title suits the overall theme of the book but it's not very unique, you could have been more creative with the title that would catch the reader's attention in an instant.

» Cover :: 5/10

The cover is slightly above average, the design is not that exquisite either, and overall graphic quality can be improved along with the text positions. Again it suits the theme but unfortunately only that would be enough. I recommend you get your cover done through a cover shop.

» Blurb :: 3/5

The blurb can definitely be shortened a bit, it's too long and gives away way too much information. I would suggest you try and keep it more discrete if possible so that the reader's curiosity will be maintained as they proceed to read the book.

Dawn :: 9/10

The character introduction and the introduction to the creatures was indeed very useful to visualize the whole story. The insight through the prologue was impressive too, it made me want to continue reading.

Plot and Idea :: 16/20

The ABO universe is something that I am getting familiar with but I have read enough to see some familiarity in the plot outline. The story setting can be similar, it doesn't pose to be much of a problem if the plot is executed in a proper format. The whole troupe of this book is not very out of the box yet the way it's been executed makes it seem interesting. It did seem a bit stretchy at times where I just had to skim through the paras because the scenes were continuing for a bit too long but apart from that I didn't see much of a problem with the whole story.

Characters and Emotions :: 14/15

The characters again were quite impressive, their relationship dynamics among themselves were entertaining to read. I could agree and relate to their thought process that helped me to connect with the characters emotionally and justify their actions and reactions.

Writing Style :: 13/15

The writing style seems quite professional although as mentioned earlier, the action and dialogue tags get a bit too stretchy. Having a vivid descriptive writing is not a problem but sometimes over-explanation of some surrounding elements can harm the reader's interest.

Grammar :: 19/20

I could barely find any grammatical errors, there might be some typing mistake here and there which I request you to clear out through proofreading.

TOTAL :: 83/100

Reviewer's Note :: I genuinely enjoyed reading your book, mostly the fact that there weren't many mistakes to begin with, I could actually enjoy reading the book. I didn't have to put much stress into the review so thank you for that. I hope you all the best with your future endeavors!

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Yours Truly,
SeeSaw Fam.