Kim_eats

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𝙲𝚘𝚟𝚎𝚛 :: 06 /10

The cover is actually pretty because of the picture you have used. One reason because that picture isn't much common. But I noticed that the title isn't very much highlighted as the story title in the cover, which is a loss. Also the author's name wasn't much visible either so I suggest to use a different colour for the fonts and make them more prominent. Because not having the author name clearly can give higher chances of plagiarism.

𝚃𝚒𝚝𝚕𝚎 :: 4/5

Cover is very catchy actually. I personally liked it a lot and I think it does for other's too. The title resembles the story plot very well so I don't think there were much errors there overall. A nice title, unique as the story!

𝙱𝚕𝚞𝚛𝚋 :: 08/10

Well blurb was good. The 'sex on drugs' part was actually wise to use because it can really attract people. However I think the author can do more justice because your description only gave away the outer, background information. The expression of how emotional the story was lacking in it. I suggest to give a second go because maybe you could make the description enough, that can intrigue people almost making them hard to not click on the story.

𝙿𝚕𝚘𝚝 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚃𝚠𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜 :: 20/25

Well the plot was actually unique and emotional. Even though there are plenty of ballerina films which can have some twin incidents, your story was actually good. For me, I can read it in curiosity to know what will happen and I think you should continue it! The flow was steady and its almost only in chapter 10 so expecting much is not practical. I especially liked how each other's encounter was and it was unique, not your typical cliché' one. Their encounter might seem a bit rushed but I think it's better just the way it is. About twists, I can only expect to be very interesting twists and turns in future because it's seldom just yet. But hey, its actually very interesting plot!

𝙲𝚑𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚎𝚛𝚜 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝙴𝚖𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 :: 09/10

Character development was a thing that was done amazingly in this book. I feel like Hoseok was literally made for the female lead and their matching is what makes is more lovely. Other characters also seemed fine so nothing much to state about it. Emotions were expressed, really. The describing's about emotions were done accurately and I loved it. The emotions, characters goes well with the story so its all good.

𝚆𝚛𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚂𝚝𝚢𝚕𝚎 :: 14/15

The vocabulary is really catchy and its good. I have sometimes encountered when some tries to use heavy fancy words but end up making them senseless. I think your usage of words is good and descriptive. The sentence formation was good as well and I think writing style which have used doesn't have any errors. The only thing to remember was to not go overboard when describing because it can get annoying to readers. The usage of a line at start of the chapter is quite catchy as well and some were logical as well.

𝙶𝚛𝚊𝚖𝚖𝚊𝚛 𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚅𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚛𝚢 :: 18/20

Grammar was actually good. I literally have nothing to say here other than awesome grammar and vocabulary. It's really been edited well and typos were minor. Punctuation didn't have much problems either. Keep up like it and it'll end up like a masterpiece at the end of work!

𝚁𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠𝚎𝚛'𝚜 𝚃𝚑𝚘𝚞𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚜 :: 4/5

I really enjoyed reading it! Love the plotline and characters. nothing to say. A very interesting story with a great plotline! I think the cover and description was the only ones with few errors. Correcting them would end your work as a master piece in my opinion!

𝐓𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐥 :: 83/100

𝐒𝐭𝐫𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐭𝐡𝐬 𝐀𝐧𝐝 𝐖𝐞𝐚𝐤𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐞𝐬 :: Grammar, vocabulary, plotline and characters were indeed strengths. Cover and description were the weaknesses I found. Best of luck!

KeonMin_X

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