BOOK: SOLUS SNIPPETS

AUTHOR: Katopark

REVIEWER: notyour_unnie

COVER: (4.5/05)

The cover is appealing, elegant and very well composed, adhering to the contents of this book. If I broaden my perspective, I would be compelled to state that the story is aesthetically resplendent. It seems that you have done everything possible in your power to lure-in the audience and make the book stand-out. There is nothing I can possibly have to add to this. You have nailed the superficial elements in their entirety!

TITLE: (04/05)

The couple of words employed to entitle the story is exceedingly attractive considering independently. A glance at the title, and I decided that this story has to be something worth time and energy. That may sound superficial, but I suppose that is a very general way the stories are perceived. However, the title is such an aspect of the story, that one can never reach the apex determining it. Push yourself harder, and I’m certain that your creativity will stumble upon something even better.

SYNOPSIS: (08/10)

The blurb was exceedingly alluring and well-suited. However, going further into the latter observation, the blurb appeared to be quite apposite when I had started reading it. However, as I neared its termination, I was struck by its mild inconsistency at instances. They are all easy fixes, so you mustn’t be too engaged with them. I just expressed what I felt.

NOTE: Normally, I would insist you to generalize the the cover and blurb a bit, as the plot does not solely revolve around Taehyung and the hierarchy of being protagonist is conspicuously well-divided between some characters, However, I understand that the these elements would enthrall a larger audience for obvious reasons, and hence would not suggest you to alter them.

EXECUTION: (09/10)

This story is, by all means, worthy of being marked this high in execution. Just a few blemishes here and there, but I truly enjoyed reading this book. I found almost everything truly impressive and laudable. These aspects are further elaborated in the review.

PLOT: (19/20)

The plot was excellently constructed and conveyed. I understand that it can be quite burdensome to plop a plot a s complex as such on your shoulders. As someone who heavily enjoys angst, I admired this profoundly. This plot has ample potential, and in my opinion, bears the promise of attracting a vast audience if propagated efficiently. The narration was so penetrating that I could envision and acquire the emotions effortlessly. The only modification I can prescribe for you is to unravel the plot at instances, as it seems slightly unviable. Perhaps try elaborating the plot at sections where the plot seems vague or indistinct. If you require for these regions to be mentioned specifically, you may PM me.

WRITING STYLE: (19/20)

The entire was stuffed with the requisite descriptive accounts and not one did I feel out of place. It's a simple and untarnished admiration that I possess for your writing style.  I can think of possibly nothing to add to this. I would just like to emphasize my aforementioned observation, which is to break down the plot at instances for audiences who are new to this particular genre of stories. Do it in such a subtle manner that leaves the writing style of the story unharmed.

GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY: (18.5/20)

In this pedagogy, I have already gathered the fact that you have a good amount of words in your vocabulary and you are well aware of their use. However, I must bring to your attention that some sections of the story were a tad bit more ornate than the other. While I am personally an adherent of such ornate language that leaves a lasting impact on the imagery, I would insist that you refrain from using words that are exceptionally uncommon, so that it may add to the legibility of your writing style.

Despite this observation, I must admit that there were hardly any errors or bugs to deal with in this story. I was evidently quite impressed with how accurately the punctuations were implemented.

CHARACTERS & DEVELOPMENT: (9/10)

The characters were remarkably explained, and the emotions well conveyed. It seemed as if the stream of words had placed me in the shoes of the narrator. It was perfectly fine, and you needn’t break another sweat on it.

TOTAL: (91/100)

FINAL NOTE: My admiration for your story is not vague in the above review. There were hardly any amends to suggest this. Nonetheless, I hope this review proves to be somewhat helpful. Thank you for sharing your beautiful writing with us. Looking forward to more from you!