
♥︎🏆Batch One 𝐑𝐞𝐬𝐮𝐥𝐭𝐬 Roster🏆
This is the batch one results roster! All of the results of each genre from batch one will now be located here after they have had they're own chapter for a day. The genres will be in alphabetical order.
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Action/ Adventure:
Judge- ketakikhadakkar
First Place:
Title: The Vanguard Vixen
Author: adretaRyder
Final Score: 97/100
Review: This book is brilliant, excellent
work and suits action genre perfectly. The
main protagonist Vivian is complete
badass and very well written. Other
characters are a lso well developed.
Discription, scenes, dialogues are also
perfect. This story clearly deserves many
more reads than it actually has.
Second Place:
Title: Purple Blood
Author: Ririflower
Final Score: 94/100
Review: Story is amazing. Chapter length is
good. Description is perfect and enough
secretive. Rida and Ludode's character are
well explained. As story proceeds further,
you start getting attached with both of
them and that's a very good thing. The
story really seemed well planned and well
written.
Third Place:
Title: The Mark of Nemesis
Author: ShyGuySamurai
Final Score: 93/100
Review: Discription is so well written, it
creates a sense of curiosity before reading.
Story is unique and everything seemed
well planned. Character like Aza and the
villagers, the 7 virtues are well developed.
Grammar and Vocabulary is good, just
keep an eye on them though. Other than
that this story is wonderful and deserves
many more reads.
Fantasy:
Judge- dark_niebla
First Place:
Title: Nagan Resilience Series: Book One
Author: ShyGuySamurai
Final Score: 98/100
Review: I really love your story. The title is so
unique and attractive. Vagueness vs.
Vividness another term for show and tell,
you have balanced these two so well.
That's why your story created mental
images to your readers mind. The emotion
also of the story was overflowing. Your
writing skill is good, I really like how you
write the story and narrate it. Good job to
that.
Second Place:
Title: The Champion
Author: Archdav
Final Score: 97/100
Review: Nice choice of title. Simple but very
meaningful and connected to your story.
Your narration was good also. There's a
few typographical error and a few mistakes
but don't worry everyone have that.
Overall like your story, the plot, and the
characters. You write so well so I don't see
much problem about your writing skills.
Third Place:
Title: Amethyst 1.Inception
Author: booklored
Final Score: 96/100
Review: I can't say much about your story. You
seem so good with your English. I don't see
many problems with your grammars. Your
vocabulary was also good same with your
narration and writing skills. Just a few
errors and mistakes like typographical but
it can be fix. You have balanced well the
show and tell factors in writing. Overall the
story was good.
FanFiction:
Judge- Flourish069
First Place:
Author: Lady_Rhey
Title: The Heart Of Babylon
Final score: 90/100
Review: Wow! I really enjoyed this,
unique writing style, unique plot and no
mistakes welldone.
Second Place:
Author: jojoahsman
Title: Little Women and Werewolves
Final Score: 89/100
Review: What I really loved about this
book was the story and the vocabulary you
had the right words for it that made it easy
to picture in my mind I really enjoyed this
book. it was nicely written.
Third Place:
Author: fanficLife77
Title: Obliterate
Final score: 85/100
Review: Nicely done dear, great work no
mistakes and I could relate to this story it,
it is definitely worth it!
General Fiction:
Judge- ShyGuySamurai
First Place:
Title: Everything that can Never Be
Author: desrelly
Final score: 89/100
Review: You can already feel the depth of
this story within the first few pages. Just
enough offered, yet just enough hidden. A
lot of thought and care have been put into
this. Keep up the good work!
Second Place:
Title: Free Me
Author: Kitty4818
Final score: 84/100
Review: At first glance, it's another high
school story about self discovery. But then
again, it's a part of life. Everyone goes
through it eventually. So with that logic,
and in combination with the deeper
aspects of thought and humanity, it's
definitely nothing generic. Great job!
Third Place:
Title: Epiphanic by Turns
Author: -ruwinx
Final score: 83/100
Review: You really set the theme and mood
in the first chapter! About the murder and
thoughts of revenge, the story flowed
along well. Though be careful with Nicah.
She's starting to feel like a Mary Sue.
Historical:
Judge- dark_niebla
First Place:
Title: Letters to Juliet
Author: happilynix
Final Score: 93/100
Review :Your story is great. I love reading it. The narration feels so smooth and good. The way the story flows feels so natural. Characters are very reliable and memorable. Their characterization is good. Show and tell was balanced really well and that makes the story good. Plot were also improving every chapter and that's a good sign. Overall your story doesn't have much problem aside from typographical errors, which are mostly the problem of a writer.
Second Place:
Title: The Male Empress
Author: TrushaJi
Final Score: 90/100
Review: Your story is originally a fantasy but of course it has a spice of history. Your title is suitable to your story. You don't have much grammar/spelling errors. Your characters were very reliable and the dialogues were natural. I just notice that you don't have much knowledge about the difference and how to use the action tag and a dialogue tag. Example of action tag is this, "I miss you." He said and hugged her immediately. An action tag ends with a period. Example of a dialogue tag or known as speech tag is this, "I want to have a dinner with you," he said. A dialogue tag ends with a comma and it doesn't contain any actions from the characters. That's their difference. Also, using ellipsis it has a limit. You can't use a () less than or more than three. Ellipsis contains only 3 periods but in your case you used more than 3 of it. Aside from that your story is good.
Third Place:
Title: My King
Author: Twinkelry
Final Score: 80/100
Review: I like your plot 'cause it was not some kind of old cliché story. I really find the originality of it from you. Aside from that I want to say that you are not making much action tag and dialogue tag in your story.
Example in your prologue when one of
your characters said this...
"Sire.
He called out one more time, this time
with a hint of more urgency...
You should not separate this part.
Example..
"Sire," he called out one more time with a
hint of more urgency...
I remove the "this time" because it's a
redundancy anymore.
You have many of these kind of errors in
your story. You can edit it by yourself or
you can have someone to proofread it for
you. Aside from that I like your story.
Humor:
Judge- nickknack21
First Place:
Title: Nellie and Jonah's Summer Sh*tlist
Author: officialzephyrtaylor
Final Score: 95/100
Review: The plot is unique and the writing is really good. Humor is on point and the cliffhangers had me wanting more.
Second Place:
Title: Cupid's Rhombus
Author: Sassy_Fangirl
Final Score: 79/100
Review: The book is humorous and the
characterization is awesome. The plot is
original but, a fewer references would have been better.
Third Place:
Title: Let's Be Friends
Author: amiekalz
Final Score: 70/100
Review: Most of the scenes and the characters were typical and unexpected. But, the writing is
good.
Mystery/ Thriller:
Judge- starpolaris
First Place:
Title: One More Time
Author: CaronJennifer
Final Score: 96/100
Review: One More Time was amazing from
the start. It focused on Nora and her
characterization. The more I read the more
I felt I knew her. The story begins
somewhat slow but it doesn't matter
because you are ingrained the whole time.
The blurb was also well written and
gripping.
Second Place:
Title: The Case Puzzle
Author: bowdownpeasantz
Final Score: 94/100
Review: First off, the cover is amazing. The
story itself matches the covers quality. It
starts off funny and focuses on the main
characters life. The Case Puzzle also
moved quickly and didn't waste time
before digging into the mystery.
Third Place:
Title: The Crossword
Author: Miamichael
Final Score: 92/100
Review: I love how The Crossword
describes Paula's life and family. You get to
know the character while also being
dissolved into a mystery. They mystery
itself, and the way it begins, is very unique.
Each chapter also starts with a little
crossword blurb that makes you look
forward to reading the chapter. The
Crossword definitely deserves more reads.
Poetry:
Judge- starpolaris
First Place:
Title: Unleash My Heart
Author: softyhartz
Final Score: 97/100
Review: The vocabulary used was amazing
and helped paint a clear picture in your
mind. I love that you used a sonnet format.
So many poems nowadays used free
verse-- it was refreshing. The poems spoke
to the soul and were extremely relatable.
Great job!
Second Place:
Title: A Trip Across the Milky Way
Author: MichaelBrouillard
Final Score: 96/100
Review: The poems had a soothing flow
and rhyme scheme. I loved the use of
words and vocab. Roses in the Dead of
Winter was perfect and had amazing
imagery.
Third Place:
Title: Bleeding Words
Author: @MightySoul9
Final Score: 95/100
Review: Ring was original and was a fun
read.I enjoyed the poem a lot. The poems
used high vocabulary which helped
portray strong emotion. Love shown
through the poems and made them feel
natural
Romance:
Judge- Ekta2000
First Place:
Title: Sugar Baby
Author: booklored
Final Score: 98/100
Review: It was a genuine treat to read. The
story idea was very original and the
descriptions painted clear pictures of what
was happening, leaving me wanting for
more. The story flowed really well with
every paragraph having a reason behind it
and notjust written to fill up space. The
storyline itself was very exciting and well
thought out and the vocabulary and
manner in which it was written was even
more beautiful.
Second Place:
Title: To and Fro with You
Author: sdaniel325
Final Score: 97/100
Review: The story had a very feel-good
experience. It was very pleasant to read
and was written extremely well. It brought
feelings of summer and joy to mind and it
was very hard to stop reading once I
started. The descriptions and settings were
portrayed beautifully, giving room for clear
imagination. The cover art was gorgeous
as well.
Third Place:
Title: Match Made in Quarantine
Author: katfeatherly
Final Score: 94/100
Review: The story had a very amusing spin
on the quarantine situation we are living in
currently. It was very fun to read and I was
left with the urge of wanting to read more
to find out what happened between the
two protagonists. The cover is very
humorous and apt for the story and the
story is also very well written. There isa
very good use of imagery and vocabulary
and is definitely one of those books you
want to keep reading over and over
because it got you laughing so much.
Sci-fi:
Judge- weirdbutbaddie
First Place:
Title: Expiration Date
Author: mugglebooks
Final Score: 87
Review: This book is honestly so
good. It starts the day before the main
character, Mae, is supposed to die, and it
goes straight to the next day. Surprise! She
doesn't die. She spends all day lazy around
and paranoid but she doesn't die. And
that's when the trouble begins.
Second Place:
Title: Thunderstorm
Author: Revan1466
Final Score: 84
Review: This book is amazing. It
starts off with a bang, literally: an asteroid
comes and the main characters black out,
only hearing officials whisper. Then the
main character, Jennifer wakes up in an
unfamiliar place, and well, "escapes". The
officials, Emily, Sara, and Jake go crazy
trying to find her, as Jennifer's fiance finds
her and tries to help her, even if she
doesn't remember him.
Third Place:
We had a tie,
Title: When I Leave
Author: ninjacookiecutters
Final Score: 83
Review: this book reminds me so
much of today's world. They start of at
school, but are already fearing this virus,
and the precautions are already in effect.
Every little thing they do is limited, but
somehow, the main characters, Annalise
and Kyle find love, even with the fear. And
then, it happens. It's one of my new
obsessions!
Title: Goldinia
Author: tidally_locked
Final Score: 83
Review: This book is gold...inia! It
starts off with both a prophesy and a
problem. Goldinia, supposed ly, will save
the planet of Zeferno one day, and that
might be sooner because the Suyands are
attacking them. But soon, she will realize
that all is not as it seems. Definitely worth
a read.
Short Story:
Judge- LaughterGirl11
First Place:
Title: Alone
Author: Choco_Late8
Final Score: 96/100
Review: Woah. Just 'woah. Nothing to describe it besides woah. That was... You've left me speechless. I-... I actually don't know what to say. Extraordinary vocabulary, barely
any grammatical errors, exciting plot
twists, emotional ending.. I would keep
going. All in all, I LOVED IT!
Second Place: we had a tie!
Title: Beneath the Pink Iron Veil
Author: Amaboo
Final Score: 89/100
Review: Dude, this is awesome! I love it so much! An intriguing plot, fabulous vocabulary, perfect grammar, and overall just wondrous. This definitely caught my attention. Superb job!
Title: The Imperium Project
Author: _winters_oddball
Final Score: 89/100
Review: You know what? I hate you... No, not
because of your personality. But because
of the cliffhangers. HOW DARE YOU!I
cannot live with this:'(Okay, enough with the sarcasm. Dude,wow'. This was amazing. You seriously have so much talent. Even though there aren't many clues as to what the f'ck is
going on, l can predict what it's about. But,
wow. How have you made me want more
in just a couple of chapters? I will read this
book in my free time. It's absolutely
splendid. Please do update faster! 've
seriously become a fan!!! I loved it! Also,
no grammar mistakes, wondrous
vocabulary, and thrilling plot twists. Overall, you have appalled me!
Third Place:
Title: Whisper of an Arrow
Author: candlemouse
Final Score: 88/100
Review:Wow. This was just amazing. I loved it!No grammar/spelling mistakes, a wide range of extraordinary vocabulary, and an eye-catching plot. What else does a good story
need? I loved it. This should be a full-
fledged book! I'll be waiting for the next
chapters. There's nothing else to say - just
read it!
Teen Fiction:
Judge- Ekta2000
First Place:
Title: Faye
Author: ElysianJoy
Final Score: 97/100
Review: The plot is something I have never
come across before. It's very unique and
extremely well written. The aura of
mysteriousness that hangs throughout the
chapters is mind-blowing and keeps
beckoning me to continue reading. The
vocabulary is absolutely stunning and the
descriptions are bang-on. Some important
topics like abuse have also been covered in
a very beautiful manner. Honestly a
wonderful story.
Second Place:
Title: Lovescapades
Author: IAm_AMK
Final Score: 94/100
Review: A beautifully written story and
another plot that is not very common.
Great use of vocabulary throughout the
chapters. The descriptions of each and
every person and setting were so
wonderful that I had a clear picture of
them all, like I was reading a picture book.
The story flowed very naturally and
enticed me to continue reading. You've
done an amazing job.
Third Place:
Title: Trapped in Ophelia's Body
Author: LeslieThroneberry
Final Score: 92/100
Review: So many important issues were
addressed in this story. Sensory processing
disorder was something I hadn't even
heard of till now and you explained the
disorder very well. Paired with social
anxiety, every issue was dealt with utmost
care and sensitivity. The themes were
handled beautifully and put into a very
heartwarnming plot. It was an eye-opening
treat to read.
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