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🔖 When The Moon Shines

Author : premebiell

Reviewer : srabonyislam

COVER : 9/10

I love the cover. It's beautiful. And, it's fully matched with the titel and storyline.

TITLE : 10/10

The titel goes perfectly with the mood and storyline of the book.

BLURB : 10/10

Blurb is really interesting and catchy. It make me jump to the stroy. Really well described.

CREATIVITY : 8/10

Story is really creative in it's own way. It was really interesting. But, in some points, I feel if there were more description. It will be better. You can add some more description about feelings. How characters feel in every scenario. It will help readers to connect with the story.

PLOT : 12/15

Story plot was really interesting and quite well described. But, it wasn't well arranged. It's need improvement.

CHARACTERS : 9/10

All characters was nicely described. The way author introduce all characters was really nice.

GRAMMAR : 13/15

In some plots, I found some spelling mistakes. Which need to be correct.

COMMUNICATION : 3/5

Author didn't reply to all the comments. Try to reply all comments.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

I enjoyed reading the story. I love every plots. There were some lacks I mentioned earlier which is need to be improve.

TOTAL : 88/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.

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