Author : miss_teeda

Reviewer : JiminiePark1318

• COVER : 8/10

Simply amazing cover. The author hasn't put much into it, but the title on the cover does all the work here.

• TITLE : 9/10

The title gives away a mysterious vibe which is really not the case. It succeeds in grabbing attention of the one seeing it.

• BLURB : 9/10

The description begins with great enthusiasm, but as it progresses, it seems like the author lost interest. It looks incomplete. Anyways, it's great though.

• CREATIVITY : 7/10

The story transitions smoothly, but I wish the author would have used some pictures or something along with the story for readers.

• PLOT : 12/15

The plot is impressive. There aren't a lot of stories with similar plot. Though the author has made sure to make the story as original as she can, and it shows.

• CHARACTERS : 7/10

Characters are well written, they are relatable in some cases. There are some things that are typical which adds loop hole to the story.

• GRAMMAR : 8/15

Many punctuation mistakes, each sentence has missing comas, unwanted spacing, many more such mistakes.

• COMMUNICATION : 3/5

Even though the story a bit reaches the readers due to the way the author has executed her work, the communication is some what missing.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15

This is one of the stories I genuinely wanted to read and would enjoy reading anytime. I would suggest editing, and the story will be ready to shine.

• TOTAL : 75/100

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