Married At First Sight
"She wouldn't marry any other,
Oh, when I saw her standing there."
That doesn't work as well as I Saw Her Standing There, but it gives the point. This annoys me so much when an OC/cannon character meets a cannon character and BOOM they're going steady and practically engaged.
NO! That's not how the universe works!
People have to at least know each other for 10 minutes before going on a date (unless you're doing a blind date thing, which I would sooo want to read at the moment). And even then, they don't actually "love" someone for much longer. You don't truly "love" your crush, do you? But you still would like to date them. The same goes for characters. There's no reason for someone to want to get married with someone they just met *cough* Anna from Frozen *cough*.
Callister McLuffanige is back, and she's going to Hogwarts this time. She steps into a compartment in the Hogwarts Express, and what does she see? A messy black haired boy with glasses and a red head with a rat. Something sparks between her and the red head, and before you know it, they're in their own compartment making out and confessing their love for each other. Oh no! Voldemort's in their compartment! Without a second thought, Ron gives up his life so Callister can get away. Callister is devastated that her true love is dead, so she gives up her own life.
Ack! That was a pain to write, especially since Callister is my personal favorite OC. This situation sounds like Romeo and Juliet or whatever mess happened with Cleopatra. I love Shakespeare, but I loathe how fast Romeo an Juliet got together. ANYWAYS... Save the confessions until they know each other more. You 'like' someone before you 'love' someone.
Don't get me wrong, you can have the two have their "moment in the woods" (Any Into The Woods fans? No? Oh well, it just means that they have a romantic session despite not knowing each other long and maybe already having a lover), but don't make them actually 'love' each other and devote their entire life to them before they even go on their second date.
Wow I've confused even myself in this chapter...
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~E.R.
Boom, I made the choice by myself.
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