Author: Remy-Cav

Reviewer: SavySagittarius

Title: 10/10

The title is appropriate as it suits your story. You did a good job in choosing the title.

Cover: 6/10

Honestly, I didn't like your cover at all. It doesn't make any sense. It has no connection with your story. If you would have used a Wolf's picture also it would have been okay. But the current one is just not appropriate.

Sensory Detail: 10/10

It was really good. The way you described Montana and Rebakah was so awesome. I especially loved what Rebakah has been feeling. They were really good.

Blurb: 8/10

The blurb is too long and your giving away a lot. Most readers will understand the story and might skip it as you said most of the important part in blurb. Considering this being a werewolf story, keep it a mysterious effect to it.

Settings: 6/10

It was okay. Just okay, the setting was just okay.. Not bad not good. You didn't give much of information on the surrounding. You mainly focused on character's emotions and feeling.

Character Development: 8/10

It was good.This is comparatively really good. You developed your characters really well. Their appearance, emotions and development was all well described.

Plot: 15/15

This was indeed perfect. No other words can describe it. The werewolf story which you developed is so different. I loved it. It was really I mean really well thought. Good job!

Grammar: 10/10

Yet again perfect. I didn't find any mistakes to say more about this.

Overall Impression: 10/15

I personally enjoyed reading the book. It was a total different plots and I read a supernatural story after very long. It felt really good. Keep the above points in mind. Keep writing amazing stories. All the best!

Total: 83/100

Grade: B-