If you didn't understand something
My writing isn't the best, and I leave a lot of gaps in the reasoning. I didn't show my editor (my friends) because they don't like this fandom as much as me. So the plot has a lot of gaps. Basically, I don't have a plot idea, and I add weird stuff whenever I feel like it, then make it sound like it fits. Bam. Perfect.
Okay, so some things I might have not explained well.
1.
Daigo was possessed by Doomscyther. There are two forms of the bey. Doomscyther and Doomscizor. Deathscizor is something that should have been edited to Doomscizor. He was possessed because he had been losing, and the bey hated that. On top of that, Daigo's conversations were short and to the point, and it felt like he was mostly using the bey for info. Also, he doens't really see the point in "please," which is another thing. Daigo's smart, but his bey got angry and impatient to do better and be better. Also, since the bey can sometiems see through the human's eyes, usually the two share vision. Doomscyther thought Daigo was too weak and not trying hard enough and not worthy, so he took possession because he thought he was better than the human.
He screwed up.
2.
Valt third person to Valt first person.
Yea, I gotta change that later. Sorry please forgive me!
3.
Robin as Phi.
There are only two main character OC's that weren't in the real series. I decided to make this story more original by making a looped past and future. This past and future would be created by one person, then destroyed by the other. Phi is known as the God of Destruction, so I figured, why not? Here's what basically happened: they weren't there before, but they were known as Hartes and Phi. This is the third time the world's been looped. But the world changed. Descendant powers became a thing, and there are two extra players in the game. Daigo isn't a lonely potato, and Wakiya is exactly the same. Free has a sister who's third in the world. Not much of a difference? Well, consider this. If Robin defeated Lui like she was about to, what would ahve happened? Spryzen wouldn't have gotten destroyed, Shu wouldn't have become Red Eye, and Valt wouldn't have gotten to battle Lui. If he didn't, it would have been Shu that got scouted to BC Sol, and Valt would have gone with him. Because he had to go on his own in the series, he got stronger so he could face Shu.
If Robin had won, the series would have been over.
4)
That fight club. I didn't go into detail bc I forgot. Maybe I'll do antoher chapter on that, but for now, here. It's an underground club in teh sewers. You can either fight, or beyblade and fight at teh same time, which is how Robin got so good at Descednant fights. Playing dirty was totally allowed. And yeah, it's illegal, but she doesn't care.
5)
If the Kurenai parents were so mean, why did Shu and Robin work hard to get money?
Well, they're kind alike their parents. Neither like each other, but The younger Kurenais need the shelter and the food and stuff since they're underaged. the older ones want to keep their apartment in Japan clean and nice and they want their job. Since they both help each other, they settle for an uneasy truce.
I hope that made sense.
If there's anything else confusing, please comment and I'll explain to the best of my skillz.
Thank you so much for reading this!
Robin out!
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