TheOriginalBree

Now onto to the next one!!

We getting it done this morning people!!!

I got a new story I've been working on, and I won't immerge from it for a minute...lol that's what happens when you're addicted...so let me get this people their money haha.

OKAY, LET"S START!!

Okay, this one is similar to the one before because of the "female Athelete" but, this one is thinking the average thoughts of how hot one guy is, and, how annoying another one is...it's not so different from the usual thoughts of your main female character.

She doesn't like other girls because...they gossip...um, guys do too *hrm* but lets continue this.

I will allow myself to laugh at the shirts and skins part, I concede it's funny.

I'm confused~~She talked at length about how she didn't like drew, but it seems to me they are good friends, and Andrew is maybe a friend, or her crush.

I'm second chapter....um, and of course she doesn't like rap *brace yourselves*...I like it, and rock, and bollywood, and classical, and everything that's music....For some reason when authors say their black character doesn't like rap, or hip-hop or R&B....it low key bothers me.

That marker doesn't suddenly make your character different...it's like saying my character isn't that black...BUT, BUT I'm not saying this is what the author meant to do. It's just my personal feeling when (I) see something like this.

Okay, so it's drew hahaha figured it was him or the other guy.

A secret passage way hmmm I'm going to have to think on that surprise.

Older sister getting to work!!! I'm kinda like this to my baby sisters managing, and lol annoyingly bossy.

I'm sorry but this is two flip floppy, she spends a paragraph saying she doesn't like someone, but then you realize as the story goes on she actually like the person.

*shakes head*

I guess it's done purposely, and yet~~~ anyway got to chapter three. This story I will have to say is getting set up for some interesting transitions at the end, and I can see that it's already popular.

I have to say, I don't appreciate her thoughts about women...it's insulting, but le'sigh it's the character *shrugs*

This is a perfect read, for class when you're bored during a lecture...and your phone light is low. Kekeke. Should you take only my opinion, NAH, check out this soccer playing lady to be. The Steps to become a Lady, enjoy it, I demand it.