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Review:

Chapters read: 13/27
Title (4/5)
Basically, your title seems nice but two subtitles are too much. Maybe you could simply keep it AgnijaaSuta. More you could write in the blurb. Moreover, the cover also doesn't depict it as a quote but a normal quote at the side which isn't that well visible.

Cover (4.5/5)
The cover is absolutely beautiful. The border, the title, the object are amazing. The blue and yellow combination only reminds of fire and your title also has to do something with fire so well done. Just the subtitle was hidden. If you remove that then it's amazing.

Book description (4.5/5)
Amazing! There's anything that I could add to it. Just some minor mistakes but other than that the story is wonderful. You mentioned that it's the second part of the book and inside the blurb, you tell a scene which awakes curiosity. You ask questions which are present to raise the curiosity of a reader. A small suggestion from my side would be that you somehow add the meaning of AgnijaaSuta in the blurb by attaching it with the story.

Prologue(4.75/5)
I haven't read the first book of the series so I can't guess the relation of both the books. But your Prologue was simply amazing. It catches a person to know what happened to her and who they are, what's their connection to each other. There's nothing I could offend to excluding some minor mistakes.

Grammar(7.5/10)
I eventually kept on finding mistakes. Some were minor mistakes and some were punctuation mistakes. A bit of editing and for sure you will cover them.

Plot (8.5/10)
I have read 3 mythological fictions during this time and these are the only one. Yours is the fourth and I could feel a clear difference in the plot. I loved the way you shaped it up and focused on important things. However, due to not reading the story before I felt a void of knowledge at this place. I can't judge the beginning. Keeping it as an open beginning with the knowledge of Google/ Wikipedia, I think you coped the story very well.

Character(s)/ Development (8.5/10)
You had 4 main characters and the first series showed too many characters. However, in this book, you managed to role around them and portray their emotions in all the ways. It was quite easy to connect with the characters and understand their feelings. The number of names irritated at times but it was still amazing.

Flow of the story (4.5/5)
I really loved your pace. There were no interruptions and you took time at the needed places. Even though in the first some chapters I felt like you were dragging it but it covered up. The sole real disturbing thing for the flow are the small grammar mistakes who directly appear at the front.

Creativity (5/5)
As said already, I don't know much about Mahabharat and Indian mythology. Only the things in Google and some basic stuff. I have given you full marks here because according to my information, you have been creative in the story. I think they only had sons who died in the war but you put the story around their daughter. So that's quite interesting to see a turn of things.

Your interest based on the content (4/5)
Taking the lack of information before out, I enjoyed the book. It was something new to discover for me after 3 stories on Draupadi. However, at times I felt like too much is missing before.

Overall opinion (8.5/10)
I would just suggest you to edit it overall after finishing the book and other than that everything was amazing. But maybe a small request, if you give the second book for getting it reviewed then there should be a small summary of the first book. That would be really helpful.

Total (64.25/75)

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