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Editor: mkmac23

Client: Greasy_Microwave

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That was some amazing story Jeff! I actually didn't even have to fix that much. It was mostly comma errors and run-ons. You had a weird group of both run-ons and simple sentences which was unusual. The main thing I touched up on was clarity. It was hard to understand the story the first read through and I tried to fix it the best I could. Well, this was only two chapters long so I don't have long notes to give you, but keep it up Jeff. (And uh, maybe shorten the title a bit)