This photo is absolutely adorable!!

I really don't have much of a critique for it, as it is mostly good and is a very well suited style.

Although I will say the eyes are a bit too far apart.

It looks alright at this angle, but imagine in she were to turn her head and you were to see her eyes.

I corrected some things.

Like the other side of her face, I suggest sketching out body proportions before doing the actual lineart itself. I also moved the neck a bit for it seemed to be holding the head in a wrongful position.

Also work on your "chest/breast placement". The body seemed crooked off on the shoulders.